Focus Question: What meaning do writers convey in poetry by using imagery and figurative language?
Get volunteers to define "stealing a base" in baseball. (If no one steps forward, explain that while the pitcher is pitching to the batter at home plate, a runner on a base looks for a chance to advance to, or "steal," the next base.)
Say, "We'll read a poem that describes this incident."
Read aloud Robert Francis' poem "The Base Stealer." Pose the following queries to the students:
"Where does the poem take place?" (The title implies that it is a baseball game, even though the location is not explained in detail.)
"What does the poem depict?" (The poet describes the sequence of events in which a baseball runner thinks about stealing a base and then actually does it.)
"In what ways does the poet aid in your comprehension of the situation?" (The poet uses metaphorical language and vivid imagery to describe the incident.)
Suggest: "You have studied various forms of metaphorical language in the past. Let's go over the various figurative language and imagery employed in the poem." Distribute copies of the Figurative Language Review (L-8-2-2 Figurative Language Review) to every pupil. Give students time to ask questions if needed after reading aloud the definitions of the various figurative language types. Throughout the poem, instruct students to locate as many instances of each kind of figurative language as they can. Inform them that although this poem might not have an example of each, the review will help them when they study other poems.
Take one or more of the subsequent actions:
Find examples of figurative language in pairs, then compile them into a class example to project onto an interactive whiteboard or computer screen.
Give each student a particular category of figurative language to look for. Before they check their answers with you, have the students meet with their partners.
Look for instances of figurative language as a class. Following a discussion, record the approved responses on the interactive whiteboard or board.
See the Figurative Language Review in the Resources folder for examples of acceptable responses. You could elucidate further with additional examples.
Ask students, "How does the use of figurative language help create the mood of the poem?" after they have finished the worksheet. (The player experiences moments of uncertainty and is filled with suspense and excitement.) Ask students to cite instances of words or phrases that convey mood in the poem as proof. (anticipation: running a scattering of steps; taunts them; uncertainty: going on and back)
Next, think about how the figurative language in the poem influences its meaning. Say, "The author uses several similes to describe the base thief. What recommendations do they make?" (It builds suspense and uncertainty to compare him to a tightrope walker—will he make it or not? Readers can better understand the player's movement and feel more suspense and anticipation when the player's movements are compared to those of a dropped ball and a child skipping rope. The player can convey his excitement for the moment by hovering "like an ecstatic bird," as if he is about to take off.) Say, "The author employs alliteration on multiple occasions. How does the poem's meaning benefit from the alliteration?" (enhances the player's movements and maintains the event's rapid pace)
Lastly, list the poem's imagery instances. Mention how the imagery heightens the poem's suspense and excitement while providing the reader with a visual perspective of the player's actions. Assist students in realizing the significance of the poem's figurative language and imagery to both the reading experience and its meaning.
Interpret the situation literally as follows: "A baseball player is attempting to steal a base and must choose whether to go for it or not. He chooses to sprint to the base at the end of the race." Ask students what aspects of this interpretation—such as the player's appearance, tension, and excitement—are missing. Assist students in realizing that figurative language adds layers of meaning through its suggestions, rather than being taken literally.
After reading "The Base Stealer," assign students who require more practice to look for instances of figurative language and imagery in other poems in pairs.
Extension:
Observe the students and make a note of those who might require more learning opportunities. As needed, offer more assistance.
Provide a clear example of how to use figurative language if that is the issue. You don't mean it literally when you say that you'd rather walk through a fire than attend your piano lesson. Your use of hyperbole and exaggeration, or figurative language, is intended to convey a point. Provide comparable, understandable examples of personification, metaphor, and simile as needed.
Poetry with lots of imagery, like Emily Dickinson's "I'll tell you how the sun rose" or Robert Frost's "After Apple Picking," can be assigned to students who struggle with it. Encourage them to look for five sense-appealing images in the poems. Next, give them an item or event to consider and have them describe it in writing using one or more senses. Inform them that they are producing original imagery.
Ask students to list multiple words (such as funny, mysterious, or melancholy) that best describe the mood of a text to give them more practice with mood. After that, ask them to write or look up instances of words or phrases that set the tone. (For instance, humorous can mean silly, lighthearted, or laughing.)
Students who are prepared to go beyond the basics should read Langston Hughes' "Mother to Son" or a comparable poem. Talk about the poem's metaphor and its implications as a class. (Life is compared to climbing a rough staircase; the metaphor implies that despite all of life's obstacles, one must continue.) Ask students to write on a piece of paper, "Life is..." and list five things that they would compare life to. (For instance, a race, a ship at sea, or an endless tale.) Put a list of the metaphors on the interactive whiteboard or board. Next, assign students to work in small groups. Give them one of the metaphors and ask them to explain how life reflects the comparison. Lastly, assign the students to compose a poem of five to eight lines with the title “Life is . . . .”